Once upon a time there lived a baby monster. It lived in Tokyo Japan. The baby monster’s name was Oogabooga. When he grew up he wanted to be a bank guard. When he was a baby was gold and he was glowing.
20 years later, When he was 21 he was exactly what he wanted to be. He was a bank guard. He protects the most expensive thing the priceless diamond. He was super duper excited that he was a bank guard.
A thief that’s been trying to get the priceless diamond that trys and trys. He finally got his hands on it. The ninja monkey heard about it. He got to work at night, he started his journey like no other. The ninja monkey found some clues, they were bananas, he knew only one person that could have done it. His evil brother!
He set of to find his evil brother. He looked in the sewers where his evil brother lived. He knows that he has all the information about his evil brother. He found the priceless diamond at the end of the sewers but he didn’t find his evil brother because he was hiding.
He found his evil brother well he thought he released that his evil brother that he found is a dummy. He found his evil brother his evil brother ran away. The ninja monkey chased after his evil brother. The ninja monkey shouted out “hey get back here” he was mad.
He finally got his evil brother. His evil brother went to jail. His evil brother was sad. His evil brother was sad because he didn’t keep the priceless diamond. The evil monkey is sad because he didn’t get the priceless diamond that he found.
Hi Cayden this story is fantastic. I am so proud of you. Keep working on building awesome paragraphs and adding detail to your characters and events. I really enjoyed when the monkey shouted out “hey get back here!” I wonder if you could add more speech to your next story. Keep up the hard work. You are awesome.
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