Cayden, I am in awe of your writing. I couldn't be prouder. It is so nice to see you being careful, thoughtful and controlled in your story telling. What I like most about this story is that it paints a picture in my mind as I read. I really hope you can save your family. Your mum being an Alien does not work for me. What motivated you to included Aliens in your brief case story? p.s I also like "It's Gonna Be Me" it is a great song. Reminds me of when I was your age. Can't wait for Part 3. From Mrs Carruthers
Cayden, I am in awe of your writing. I couldn't be prouder. It is so nice to see you being careful, thoughtful and controlled in your story telling. What I like most about this story is that it paints a picture in my mind as I read. I really hope you can save your family. Your mum being an Alien does not work for me. What motivated you to included Aliens in your brief case story?
ReplyDeletep.s I also like "It's Gonna Be Me" it is a great song. Reminds me of when I was your age.
Can't wait for Part 3.
From Mrs Carruthers