Nice job with your writing Cayds but do you think you could write a few more setences to add more detail? There is so much more I want to know about those tents! Were they big? Did the Year 5 and 6 kids have tidy or messy tents? How did they smell? Would you ever like to sleep in one of those tents?
Nice job with your writing Cayds but do you think you could write a few more setences to add more detail? There is so much more I want to know about those tents! Were they big? Did the Year 5 and 6 kids have tidy or messy tents? How did they smell? Would you ever like to sleep in one of those tents?
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